Coloring the Page: Brown


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We’re tackling brown synonyms today as part of the ongoing “Color Kaleidoscope” series. For the full story behind why I love using this tool, see my original post. Also, check out the previous entries for “Red,” “Blue,” “Green,” “Yellow,” and “Black” here.

Aeneous or Aeneus: A brassy or golden green shade of brown
Almond: Pale tan to light brown
Auburn: Moderate reddish brown
Aureate: A golden shade of brown
Beige: Light grayish brown or yellowish brown
Brass: Between brown and gold, often polished and shiny
Bronze: Yellowish olive brown
Brunette: Dark brown
Chestnut: A moderate to deep reddish brown
Chocolate or Coco: Rich brown, varying shades from light brown to very dark
Coffee: Darker shades of brown to deep brown
Dun: Neutral brownish gray to dull grayish brown
Ginger: Strong reddish brown
Hazel: A light to strong brown or yellowish brown, sometimes with flecks of other colors like green
Honey: Yellowish brown gold
Leathery Brown: Light to dark brown
Khaki: Ranging from light olive brown to grayish brown
Mole: Light brown to dark gray
Mud: Dark, dirty brown; can be lighted as it dries
Mahogany: Moderate reddish brown; often sleek
Sandy: Light grayish to yellowish brown
Sienna: Brownish yellow to brownish orange
Tan: Very light brown
Taupe: Brownish gray to dark yellowish brown
Toast: Light brown
Umber: Natural Earth brown

Olympic Blog Relay!



I have a confession, guys. I love the Olympics.

No, really. I ADORE them! I get all choked up about the inspirational commercials, the Cinderella stories and heartbreaking near misses (Dan Jansen, I’m looking at you!).

I swam competitively for years, and the training, discipline and motivation Olympic athletes maintain amazes me. I admire them so much. They put everything on the line for that one potential moment. It’s enough to make me stand and cheer right along with Visa – “Go World!”

I’ve been lucky enough to see two Olympic Games: Atlanta in ’96 and Utah in ’02. There truly are no words to capture the awesomeness of watching a medal ceremony, no matter which country is on the top of the stand. Chills!! And I’m so excited for London this year!

It got me thinking. You know what else requires inspiration and motivation (plus a hefty amount of tenacity, guts and maybe a little insanity)?

Writing!

So, I’d like to host a little games of our own this year. For the 17 days of the Olympics, from July 27 to August 12, I’m looking for guest bloggers to help me “coach” fellow writers to victory.

The overall theme is the idea of rising above – inspiration and motivation. But feel free to blog about anything that creatively ties back to the spirit of the games. Writing advice, favorite Olympic moments, etc. And if anyone from London wants to send us “live” updates, that’d be great too.

It’s not quite an official blog hop, but I hope it will be a fun way to share in the excitement and visit some new or different blogs. Sort of our own version of the torch relay!

You can post on your own blog and I’ll link to it, or you can post as a guest on Write Me A World. Just leave a note in the comments about which date you’d like to take.

I’ll cover the first day and the last day – the “opening and closing ceremonies,” if you will.



There’ll be prizes too! What would the Olympics be without a little bronze, silver and gold action?

I’ll update the calendar as we get closer and follow up with the guest bloggers about details or questions.

Welcome to the XXX Olympiad!

Karen Returns!

Last week, I interviewed my good writing friend, Karen Philips. She's back today to talk a little more about writing conferences and the publishing world in the UK.

1. You went to last year's Swanwick Writer's Conference. Tell us about it!
Oh, yes. The Swanwick Writers’ Summer School is in Derbyshire, UK. The annual conference lasts a whole week in August. Over 600 writers, published and pre-published, plus agents, famous authors, (yes, I’ve stood in the bar with Iain Banks), all sharing meals, talks on the lawn and generally hanging out. Pretty mind-blowing if you’ve never been to anything like that. Jealous!

I didn’t know many writers beforehand and wrongly assumed the place would be full of introverts, who prefer reading to talking to people! Couldn’t have been more wrong. Which just shows what I know!

Everyone was very friendly. The excellent back-to-back lectures covered everything from self-editing to Sci Fi writing, and you could dip in and out as you wanted. I also had two agent one-to-one sessions. One with John Jarrold (Iain Banks’ top agent) and one with Benjamin Scott (a YA writer, teacher, SCBWI organiser-person). They both went through my chapter one and gave very insightful feedback. I think that was a turning point for me. Their positive encouragement, as professionals in the industry, made me realise that perhaps I could actually do this writing lark, and be good at it.

Of course you can, silly!

One of the best bits of the course was being immersed with other people like me! All talking about plotting, character development, book recommendations, and wanting to discuss the writing problems they needed to find solutions to. I loved it! Welcome to Planet Writer. It’s a blast.

Love the "Planet Writer" phrase. I need to use that one more often.

2. What differences have you noticed between the U.S. and U.K. publishing markets?
That’s a really good question. There are some big differences as far as I can see. And it’s swings and roundabouts for writers in either country.

My understanding of the U.S. market, especially in my genre, YA, is that it’s bigger and much more established. There are ten times as many agents representing YA, so you have more to submit to. Here in the U.K. there are perhaps twelve agencies that I can/want to query. Once I’ve gone through all twelve, I’m stuck. 

However, on the plus side for the U.K., we’re in an expanding market. YA is only just getting going, and all the U.K. agents are open for submissions from British writers. 

The other lucky thing about being a U.K. writer is that the submission process to agents is easier than in the U.S. We are required to send an email query letter, a one page synopsis and the first chapter/three chapters depending on the agency. So we get to send them our work, before being rejected! You guys sometimes only get to send the query letter without being able to send any of the actual work, until it’s requested. That’s tough.

But, hey, you guys have better weather and cool language. So you can’t complain. Meanwhile, it’s peeing down here in England.  It is June, after all. ;-))

Haha, noted.

Good luck with the writing!

Thanks again for the great insights, Karen, and for generally being all kinds of awesome.

Writer Spotlight: Karen Phillips

Hi all, I want to treat you to a Q&A today from my friend Karen across the pond. She’s got some fantastic insights about writing resources and a passion for YA.

Take it away, Karen!

Tell us about the first time you knew you wanted to be a writer.
I guess it was when I was recuperating from being pretty ill. I’d come out of the hospital and needed to rest a lot. So I was listening to BBC Radio 4 plays, comedy sketches and dramas. I read 120 novels in one year. The following year, I read 130. Whoa! And I rediscovered the joy of storytelling, and how writing allows the author to connect with readers, at a profound level. That’s very powerful. How you, as a reader, can be taken into another world, fall in love with characters and feel strong emotions. I get very excited about that!

What type of projects are you working on right now?
I’m currently working on my next YA novel. I love YA stories. There’s something very immediate, different and energetic in YA writing. You can push boundaries and explore so much more. I’m having a lot of fun writing my current ms. I’m trying something new, learning how to do it better ,and the cast of characters are people I’m really happy spending time with. They make me laugh every day!

What are your top one or two tips for other writers out there?
Tip number one:  Get yourself a brilliant and supportive writing mentor/buddy. I found mine through the Nathan Bransford forums. She’d written some excellent feedback on other peoples’ work. I totally agreed with her editorial comments and her high challenge, high support style. Luckily for me, she was open to striking up a friendship, and she’s since taught me heck of a lot. Here’s lookin’ at you, kid. ;-))

Aww, thanks Karen! *blush*

Tip number two:  Read. Read. Read. Read everything. Read novels in your chosen genre. Read work outside your genre. Read other writer’s work at critique groups. Read about the publishing industry. Read relevant agent’s blogs, twitter feeds and articles. You get the message.

What is the most helpful writing lesson you’ve learned?
Ooo, tough one. There are so many. Probably the old ‘show don’t tell’ lesson. It’s a tough one that takes a while to get right. And I still have to challenge myself on it. But once you do crack it, it takes your writing to a much deeper level.

Any mentors you want to give a shout out to?
I’m really very lucky in that I have an A-Team of three readers (friends) who read through my drafts and give me their thoughts. I’m also part of an online YA novel critique group via my membership of SCBWI. It’s good to share your work with trusted friends who can keep you going, especially when the going gets tough. Writing can be lonely, and sometimes you need the sanity check. 

What have been your biggest challenges along the way?
One of my biggest challenges is trying to remain focused, sane and not procrastinate by chatting on Facebook/Twitter, when I should be re-reading the ms for the hundredth time. Editing can be tough. Don’t get me wrong, it can be fun to see your novel take shape. But re-reading something that you know inside and out, to try and spot where you can improve it, is crazy-making.

Chocolate helps. So true!

How have you overcome those?
Be telling myself to shut up and get on with it. A good stern talking to never hurt anyone.

Do you have any fun resources, contacts or web links you want to share?
I think Nathan Bransford’s website/blog/forums are brilliant. Lots of excellent info, plenty of opportunities to connect with other writers in the same boat and you feel like you’re getting the inside scoop on the writing world!

I’d also recommend Donald Maass’ Writing the Breakout Novel Workbook. Makes you want to weep over it as you realise just how much work you still have to do on your ms, but worth the effort.

SCBWI membership is another excellent way to connect with other writers. Everyone (published or pre-published) is very friendly and supportive.


Thanks again, Karen!

She'll be back next week to talk about the Swanwick Writer's Conference and some differences in US/UK publishing markets. If you want to catch up with her in the meantime, find her on Facebook, Twitter and Goodreads.

Onscreen Authors We Love: Alex Sheldon


Today’s onscreen author is the hapless and lovable Alex Sheldon, as portrayed by Luke Wilson in Alex & Emma.

I really love how his muse changes with the wind. He imagines his main female character—and coincidentally his love interest, Emma—as everything from a Russian school marm to a French nanny.

Emma (Kate Hudson) is also hilarious as the reader/stenographer who is constantly second-guessing Alex’s initial ideas. She makes the story better in the process, and it’s so fun to see their creative process and the “imagined” world of their actual characters.

Literary Mad Libs

Remember this game from when we were kids? You pick a noun, a verb, a what-have-you to fill in the blank and make a story.

Well, we can use it to boost our writing now, too.

Choosing the right word can give us more information with fewer words. Have some fun with these examples, then scroll down and see what the authors actually chose.





What the Authors Used

Example #1
Harry kicked off into the air and the Firebolt zoomed higher and faster than any other broom; he soared around the stadium and began squinting around for the Snitch, listening all the while to the commentary, which was being provided by the Weasley twins’ friend Lee Jordan.
Harry Potter and the Prisoner of Azkaban, J.K. Rowling

Example #2
I creep silently through the shadows, letting them conceal me. But nothing seems suspicious. There’s no sign of any kind of struggle, no disruption of the needles on the ground. I’ve stopped for just a moment when I hear it. I have to cock my head around to the side to be sure, but there it is again. Rue’s four-note tune coming out of a mockingjay’s mouth.
The Hunger Games, Suzanne Collins

Desperately Seeking Books

I've been on the search lately for a great space opera or a fantasy set in space. Something like an Ender's Game, Gabriel's Ghost or Killashandra.

I'm not overly into hard sci-fi, but spaceships and a fast-paced plot would be amazing! Got any suggestions for me?

In case you ever find yourself in the same situation, check out my latest reviews on the Goodreads shelf to the right. I never know whether to pull those into full blog posts or not, so let me know if you guys are ever craving more than the click-through experience for book reviews.

Lastly on the topic of books, Michael Pierce gave me The Booker Award for sharing my thoughts on a bunch of great reads! Glad to do it, my friend.

Michael's book Provex City is now on Amazon. Check it out!

That's it for now, folks. Summer reading time beckons!

Coloring the Page: Black



Okay all you Camp NaNo’ers (and the rest of us too!), here’s the next in our color synonym series. It can be tricky to find new words to describe blackness and darkness in the absence of color.

The handy “Descriptive Kaleidoscope” tool offers a few suggestions. For the full story behind it, see my original post here. Also, check out the previous entries for “Red,” “Blue,” “Green” and “Yellow.”

Charcoal: Black or grayish black
Coal: Very black and dull; no shine
Dusky: The darker shades of twilight; shadowy grays and dark blues and purples
Ebony: Dark, deep rich black
Inky: Dark bluish black
Jet Black: Dark, normally shiny or polished and solid black
Raven: Very dark black
Sable: Grayish yellow brown, leaning toward black
Shadowy: Absence of color; darker than dusky
Somber: Dark or dull in color

I think our word choices for black, more so than any other color, can automatically convey a mood to the reader. Ebony, for example, always seems regal to me, while Somber is…well, somber.

First & Last Lines Follow-up

Thanks for all the comments on Wednesday's first and last lines. Everyone has unique preferences for what they like and look for - though people seemed to enjoy #10 for the opening. The answers for your favorite ending were pretty varied.

It’s also really interesting that there wasn’t a book that stood out as a clear winner for both opening AND closing.

Here are the mystery books I used with the corresponding numbers of their openings and closings.

Dragonflight, Anne McCaffrey
 #9 Lessa woke, cold.
#3 Mother of us all, he was glad that now, of all times conceivable, he, F’lar, rider of bronze Mnementh, was a dragonman of Pern.


Harry Potter and the Sorcerer’s Stone, J.K. Rowling
#1 Mr. and Mrs. Dursley, of number four, Privet Drive, were proud to say they were perfectly normal, thank you very much.
#7 “They don’t know we’re not allowed to use magic at home. I’m going to have a lot of fun with Dudley this summer…”


Twilight, Stephenie Meyer
#11 I’d never given much thought to how I would die—though I’d had reason enough in the last few months—but even if I had, I would not have imagined it like this.
 #9 And he leaned down to press his cold lips once more to my throat.


The Hunger Games, Suzanne Collins
#4 When I wake up, the other side of the bed is cold.
#3 I take his hand, holding on tightly, preparing for the cameras, and dreading the moment when I will finally have to let go.


The Curse of Chalion, Lois McMaster Bujold
 #5 Cazaril heard the mounted horsemen on the road before he saw them.
 #1 His ladies would be waiting.


Mistborn, Brandon Sanderson
 #7 Ash fell from the sky.
#5 Vin closed her eyes, simply feeling the warmth of being held. And realized that was all shehad  ever really wanted.


Fool Moon, Jim Butcher
 #8 I never used to keep close track of the phases of the moon.
 #6 I settled back to ask Susan over, and enjoyed the warmth of the fire.


The Demon’s Lexicon, Sarah Rees Brennan
 #2 The pipe under the sink was leaking again.
 #8 He felt grounded and at home already under his brother’s gentle human hands.


The Ten Thousand, Paul Kearney
 #3 By the sea, Rictus had been born, and now it was by the sea that he would die.
#10 Her mule was hobbled on the hill behind, and upon it Jason’s black armour glittered cold in the sun.


A Devil in the Details, K.A. Stewart
 #10 There’s a certain sound the human head makes when it hits the trunk of a tree.
 #11 Have I mentioned how much I love my wife?


Bloodfever, Karen Marie Moning
#12 All of us have our little problems and insecurities.
#4 What had changed was me.


The Mists of Avalon, Marion Zimmer Bradley
#6 Even in high summer, Tintagel was a haunted place; Igraine, Lady of Duke Gorlois, looked out over the sea from the headland.
#12 Her work was done.


The Name of the Wind, Patrick Rothfuss
 #13 It was night again.
 #13 It was the patient, cut-flower sound of a man who is waiting to die.

Fave First & Last Lines

As we head into prime summer reading time, I thought it’d be fun to look at opening and closing lines. Maybe there’ll be one or two that catch your eye for your TBR list. It’s also a good way to see what works and what doesn’t in our own writing.

The lines below are all from recent books. Let me know which ones you like best in the comments trail.

My faves are #10 and #11 for openings and #5 and #8 for closings. Here’s what I learned: go for the intrigue factor in your opening, and aim for resolution and lyricism, poetry and peace at the end.

I’ll share which books these are from later in the week, though I bet you can guess some!

Openings



  1. Mr. and Mrs. Dursley, of number four, Privet Drive, were proud to say they were perfectly normal, thank you very much.
  2. The pipe under the sink was leaking again.
  3. By the sea, Rictus had been born, and now it was by the sea that he would die.
  4. When I wake up, the other side of the bed is cold.
  5. Cazaril heard the mounted horsemen on the road before he saw them.
  6. Even in high summer, Tintagel was a haunted place; Igraine, Lady of Duke Gorlois, looked out over the sea from the headland.
  7. Ash fell from the sky.
  8. I never used to keep close track of the phases of the moon.
  9. Lessa woke, cold.
  10. There’s a certain sound the human head makes when it hits the trunk of a tree.
  11. I’d never given much thought to how I would die—though I’d had reason enough in the last few months—but even if I had, I would not have imagined it like this.
  12. All of us have our little problems and insecurities.
  13. It was night again.

Endings



  1. His ladies would be waiting.
  2. Mother of us all, he was glad that now, of all times conceivable, he, F’lar, rider of bronze Mnementh, was a dragonman of Pern.
  3. I take his hand, holding on tightly, preparing for the cameras, and dreading the moment when I will finally have to let go.
  4. What had changed was me.
  5. Vin closed her eyes, simply feeling the warmth of being held. And realized that was all she had  ever really wanted.
  6. I settled back to ask Susan over, and enjoyed the warmth of the fire.
  7. “They don’t know we’re not allowed to use magic at home. I’m going to have a lot of fun with Dudley this summer…”
  8. He felt grounded and at home already under his brother’s gentle human hands.
  9. And he leaned down to press his cold lips once more to my throat.
  10. Her mule was hobbled on the hill behind, and upon it Jason’s black armour glittered cold in the sun.
  11. Have I mentioned how much I love my wife?
  12. Her work was done.
  13. It was the patient, cut-flower sound of a man who is waiting to die.

Things I Don't Get


  • Why people don’t seem to re-read books. It’s very difficult for me to imagine only reading a book once. I’ve read most of the novels on my shelves multiple times, and I’m constantly opening them up to read specific sections as inspiration. My dad likes to say you have to be “a student of the game,” so I’m always studying how my favorite authors approach certain scenes.

  • Why cliffhanger endings are a no-no for series. It works with TV finales all the time. The idea is to draw in the viewer/reader and make them scramble for more. As a reader, I love these endings because I’m SO excited for the next installment. I understand frustrations about the sometimes lengthy delays between books, but the ability to e-publish is quickly doing away with a lot of those concerns.

  • Why people would ever truly believe that series authors stretch out their stories just to make more money. C’mon, we’re all writers here. I just can’t see this being a big motivation. If we’re writing a series, chances are we start out with a vague idea of the ending but not an exact route for how to get there. It doesn’t surprise me at all that what an author originally planned as a trilogy might spill over into 4 or 5 books. I’m also never bothered by it because it means I get to tag along with my favorite characters for longer.

What are some things that baffle you about writing, reading or publishing?

Onscreen Authors We Love: Rick Castle

Nathan Fillion. Need I say more?

Castle is an absolutely fabulous show for many reasons, and its own writers are definitely folks to be admired. What makes it doubly fun is the number of ways Castle’s authorly expertise comes into play.

He finds inspiration in the strangest places. He uses research sources to help his cop partner Kate Beckett (Played by the amazing Stana Katic) get information.

He has literally helped the NYPD solve crimes by using the phrase: That’s not how I would write it.

Plus, he has an awesome writing space, and the show did a very cool promo where they actually published "Castle's" book Heat Wave and stocked it in major bookstores.

Richard Castle is one of the most nuanced writers on TV and every week it’s like a little boost of encouragement, inspiration and motivation to keep writing.

Also, season finale anyone? It is going to be a long, hot summer for Castle and Beckett!