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Margo Kelly's WHO R U REALLY Cover!

I'm late to the party on this one, guys, but wanted to give a shout out and congrats to Margo Kelly for the cover reveal of her debut YA thriller, WHO R U REALLY? Check out the gritty, hackerish feel of the cover. Perfect fit for the story!

WHO R U REALLY?
by Margo Kelly
Merit Press -- Sept. 18, 2014

Thea's overprotective parents are driving her insane. They invade her privacy, ask too many questions, and restrict her online time so severely that Thea feels she has no life at all. When she discovers a new role-playing game online, Thea breaks the rules by staying up late to play. She's living a double life: on one hand, the obedient daughter; on the other, a girl slipping deeper into darkness. In the world of the game, Thea falls under the spell of Kit, an older boy whose smarts and savvy can't defeat his loneliness and near-suicidal despair. As Kit draws soft-hearted Thea into his drama, she creates a full plate of cover stories for her parents and then even her friends.

Soon, Thea is all alone in the dark world with Kit, who worries her more and more, but also seems to be the only person who really "gets" her. Is he frightening, the way he seems sometimes, or only terribly sad? Should Thea fear Kit, or pity him? And now, Kit wants to come out of the screen and bring Thea into his real-life world. As much as she suspects that this is wrong, Thea is powerless to resist Kit's allure, and hurtles toward the same dark fate her parents feared most. Ripped from a real-life story of Internet stalking, Who R U Really? will excite you and scare you, as Thea's life spins out of control.


About the Author:
Margo Kelly is a native of the Northwest and currently resides in Idaho. A veteran public speaker, Margo is now actively pursuing her love of writing. Who R U Really? is her debut novel and will be published by Merit Press in September 2014. Margo welcomes opportunities to speak to youth groups, library groups, and book clubs.
   




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Do Cliches Have Their Place?

Before everyone jumps into the debate at once, let me clarify. In many cases, clichés are just what they sound like—overused, tired and a little bit lazy. But, BUT…I sometimes wonder if there are times when they can be acceptable, nay, even helpful for writers.

Think about pacing, for example. I don’t know about you, but there are definitely times during fast-paced scenes when I don’t want to spend an extra beat on a new, unique and out-of-the-box description. A cliché will do just fine. In fact, I’d argue that it helps move the action along simply because it’s so expected and allows readers to gloss over it, absorbing the needed details very quickly without breaking their nail-biting, edge-of-their-seats pace.

You can also use a twist on actual clichés to have a little fun and deepen your world. Check out Anne McCaffrey’s unique take on “necessity is the mother of invention.”

Necessity—or, is it jealousy—hatches many a touch shell. 
    
    
It conveys the same sentiment as the original, but gives a glimpse of her character’s mindset (jealousy) and the world (dragons – eggs – shell).

After all, Madeleine L’Engle started one of the best known and best loved fantasy books — A Wrinkle in Time — with one of the oldest clichés in the book: It was a dark and stormy night. Not that I’d recommending trying that again. The point is she was able to take a cliché and successfully turn it on its head.


It’s all in how you choose to apply them.

April Madness! Recap

Flowers weren't the only things
keeping busy last month.

April was crazy! What was I doing besides playing alphabet games on the blog, you ask?

  • You might have noticed the new "follow" button on the right. Yup, I finally joined the Twitter world. Would love to tweet with all of you!
 
  • I went to the Madison Writers' Conference: saw Jane Friedman, Nathan Bransford and Jacquelyn Mitchard, among others; attended some great workshop sessions--Laura Biagi's opening pages session was fantastic; met new writing pals and listened to keynote Michael Perry next to this guy. (Steven's life story and words are seriously inspirational, guys! Check it out. And he's got a great laugh, which we heard a lot, because Michael Perry is hilarious.)

  • Launched a third book for the day job

  • Joined another crit group with lots of talented writers.

  • Celebrated with two of my original crit pals who self-published their novels--Mary Ann penned To Know Her, a poignant contemporary about a tragic accident that asks, How well can we ever really know those we love?, and Mark kicked off his druidic fantasy saga with Realm of Druids. Hats off, guys!

Those are the highlights from me. How about you? What have you been up to lately?

CUTLASS: Pirate Sails & Fan-worthy Tales



Everyone sufficiently recovered from A-to-Z? Good, because I've got a fun read for you guys today with Ashley Nixon's CUTLASS. Those of you who don't know Ashley, check out her blog. She's got funny, heartwarming posts about writing and life.

Synopsis:
Notorious pirate Barren Reed has one thing on his mind: Revenge against the man who killed his father. So kidnapping his enemy’s fiancée seems a perfect plan…until he actually does it.

Larkin Lee is more than a pretty face and fiancée to a powerful man. Her fierce personality is enough to make any pirate want to push her overboard.

But when the King of the Orient comes to Barren with a task—to find the Bloodstone, a powerful gem thought only to exist in legend, Barren sees another opportunity to destroy his enemy. Together, Barren, Larkin and a crew of pirates set off to find the stone, only to discover it caused the death of Barren’s own mother and Larkin’s, too. As his  strongest allies turn into his greatest enemies, and the life of the girl he kidnapped becomes more important than he ever dreamed, Barren’s quest for revenge becomes a fight to save the Orient.

My Thoughts:
When Ashley Nixon first began talking about her debut novel, CUTLASS, I knew it’d be right up my alley. Tall ships! Pirates! Swords! Magic! I’d have been excited about any one of those elements—put them all together and that book’s definitely finding a place on my shelf.

CUTLASS didn’t disappoint. It’s a rollicking, adventurous tale, centered around young pirate extraordinaire Barren Reed and his kidnappee (aka daughter of an important lord, aka his brother’s fiancée, aka his eventual love interest-of course!) Larkin Lee. I liked the dynamic between Barren and Larkin a lot. It’s sweet, yet challenging. I always enjoy reading about couples who push each other, who become better together than they are apart. You can see the beginnings of that type of relationship in CUTLASS. Barren and Larkin are both outspoken, which also led to fun snarky exchanges like this one:

          Barren: “And how can I trust that you won’t tell the entire population who I am?”

          Larkin raised a brow and smirked. “You gave me a sword,” she said.

Gotta love a lady with a sword!

Nixon also builds a colorful and believable cast of secondary characters, including my favorite, Leaf. His background as an Elfin-lord-turned-pirate was interesting in itself, but what I liked most was how he acted as Barren’s conscience and moral compass through much of the book. The two of them have a deep rock-solid friendship, even though they’re very different.

The world of CUTLASS is well-developed and, though I wished we could spend a little more time in each location, Nixon does a nice job describing the various ports. I am a sucker for tall ships (they’re the main setting in my first book), so I really loved passages like this:

Barren stood on the dock, staring at the ship. It was a beautiful creation—intricate in its woodwork with detailed spirals carved along the rail, awash in gold. The cabin and main hold were all lined in ebony wood, which caused the white sails to stand out like stars against the night. In contrast to the black, the hull of the ship was a rich rosewood. It was unbelievably fancy, and Barren almost mourned what would become of it on this journey.

Makes you want to be out on the open deck with the spray in your face, right?!

I found the plot enjoyable too, with a couple key twists to keep readers guessing. It was neat to see how Nixon wove magic into the pirate world, and I really liked the history behind that pivotal part of the story. Overall, there were places I wanted the book to delve a little deeper, but I’m excited to see where this story and this author take us next! 

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AUTHOR BIO
Ashley was born and raised in Oklahoma, where the wind really does sweep down the plains, and horses and carriages aren’t used as much as she’d like. When she’s not writing, she’s hard at work on her Master’s degree in Library Science and Information Technology, working out, or pretending she’s Sherlock Holmes. Her obsession with writing began after reading the Lord of the Rings in the eighth grade. Since then, she’s loved everything Fantasy–resulting in an unhealthy obsession with the ‘geek’ tab on Pinterest, where all things awesome go.



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