Book Review: Name of the Wind

I have to admit I’m lukewarm on this book. In many ways, there’s a lot of talent in these pages. At certain points, I caught glimpses of Rothfuss’ skill – I cared for the characters, I was intrigued by the plot, the dialogue had a nice twist.

Unfortunately, those elements rarely felt like they were all working together for me. I struggled with how to put my finger on it, and I think it comes down to this: The story is a fantastic concept. I simply would have told it in a different way.

Name of the Wind is told in multiple layers, stories within a story.  At times, this worked really well for me. Others, not so much.

Layer 1: Real Time
These were some of my favorite scenes. I actually wished we got more time with these. In my opinion, Bast is the most intriguing character in the entire book. There’s so much left unsaid in these snippets, it drives a lot of emotion and mystery. There is one scene, where Kvothe is alone, reacting to a painful memory – it's one of the most touching moments in the book.

Layer 2: Flashbacks to Kvothe’s life
The best part of these, by far, was any scene involving his music. That’s where the character shines…otherwise, he’s kind of obnoxious and the pacing is a little off.

Layer 3: Storytelling in the Flashbacks
At various points, secondary characters break out into extended storytelling mode, relating the myths and legends of Rothfuss’ world. I actually loved these sections! They felt like mini stories in themselves, and often hung together better than other aspects of the overall book. They had rhythm, emotion and power that pulled me in.


Though I didn’t connect with the book completely, I will probably eventually finish the trilogy because I’m curious to see where Kvothe’s story goes.

Friday Poll: Your Fave Part of the Story

What part of a story do you most like to write? I tend to gravitate toward the high-tension moments myself. They're always the ones that are most clear in my mind and the most fun to write.

I'm guessing we're all a little different, so you tell me - what's your favorite part?

Your Favorite Part to Write

Ask the Reader #4

It's been a while since we did an Ask the Reader post. This one comes from my pal Kristen (If you missed her great interview about Judy Garland and writing historical fiction/memoir, check it out here)

Favorite book/author?
I am a huge fan of Bram Stoker’s Dracula, as well as just about anything by Edgar Allan Poe. Oh, and I have loved Lewis Carroll’s Alice in Wonderland my entire life. Talk about a frightening villain {The Jabberwocky}. Guess I can’t pick just one!

Where do you typically get your books these days?
I recently received a Kindle, which I have fallen in love with. It’s great to be able to get books quickly, and I love that classics are offered by Project Guttenberg. It’s already getting me to read more, which I’ve been missing out on lately.

Have you ever had a “throw the book across the room” moment? If so, why?
I definitely wanted to throw Wicked across the room. I made myself finish it because I have a hard time just giving up on a book, but that one was really a struggle to get through. The narrative voice was unpleasant and unlikable. The play is far better than the book. I’m glad I saw the play before reading the book, because if it had been the other way around, I probably wouldn’t have went to the play.

I totally agree on this one!

What do you look for in a good story?
It seems to be that I either like a horror, a fantasy or a love story. A mix of all three is even better. The voice needs to be interesting and the sentences varied. I need something to grab me in the first few pages and make me care about what happens to the characters. I’m also trying to get through some classics that I’ve never read. Right now I’m reading “The Picture of Dorian Gray,” by Oscar Wilde.

Anything else you want us to know?
Among the first books I wrote were those for my “Girl of Today” around age 9-10. This was an American Girl doll that came with six blank books so you could write her stories. From what I can tell, this is no longer done with this line of dolls, which is really too bad. I loved writing those stories. They were 20 pages long. With the last story I wrote, I couldn’t stop writing at the 20 page mark. I had to cut out additional pages and glue them into the book. This was a great idea that they had, and it really expanded my mind and encouraged my creativity at a young age.

Aww, that's awesome! I remember doing similar things with "Make Your Own Newspapers" and a bunch of short stories I made up as a kid. Thanks Kristen!

If you missed out on previous Ask the Reader interviews, you can always find them in the sidebar under that label.

Chlorinated Inspiration

Back when I was swimming, my coaches made us keep “swim journals.” We had to write down all the sets we did in practice, what we ate, our resting heart rate, our goal times, etc.

I found my journal the other day and had fun paging through it. The coolest part was the cover, where I remember papering all sorts of encouraging, motivational quotes. Several of them apply as much to writing and life in general as they did to swimming.

So here, in all their decade-old semi-soggy glory, are those words of inspiration:


In case you can't read them:

"I am an investor. I invest all of my heart and soul."

"The most valuable gold and silver are paid for in sweat." (Or, really, any prize worth keeping)

"Most people want to win. But not everyone believes he or she is capable of winning. Empty works can fail thousands, but that which is in the heart, life will surely expose."

Shakespearean Swine

Because this is too hilarious not to share...

I saw it on Rachelle Gardner's blog last year, but if you haven't watched it yet - it's a treat, and if you have - well, you know you'll want to enjoy it again.

Happy Friday!

Dragonslayer Interview



You've seen the cover and you know you want to read it. Christine Rains' Dragonslayer is now available, and she was kind enough to stop by for a quick chat.

Hi Christine! Thanks for stopping by. I know people are excited about the 13th Floor series in general and about the Dragonslayer  Where did you get inspiration for this story in particular?
I love taking traditional fantasy tales and putting a modern twist on them. I've seen a lot of urban fantasy and paranormal romance with modern day dragons, but most of the time, they're good guys. Weren't the dragons always the villains in old tales? I also wondered what happened to those brave knights that used to slay the dragons. That's how Xan was born!

One of the first things that jumped out at me was Xan’s name. Xanthus Ehrensvard. I love it! Is there a story or meaning behind its origins?
I wanted an unusual name for my dragonslayer. A grand name. Most people call him Xan and assume it's short for Alexander. Xanthus was a name used a lot in ancient Greece. The last King of Thebes was named Xanthus. It means “yellow-haired” which suits Xan, but it's also a strong sounding name. Ehrensvard is a Swedish surname. Broken down, it means “honor” and “care.” I often look up meanings of names as I'm choosing them for my characters. If I can, I try to make them fit their personalities. A handy way to procrastinate while telling yourself you're doing research!

I do the same thing, and I have to admit I was kind of hoping you might answer that way.

So, how does Xan get along with his fellow 13th floor mates?
Xan gets along well enough with most of the other tenants except Kiral the vampire. Marc the demon is the closest thing to a friend he has. Xan also feels a brotherly protectiveness over Harriet the banshee.

You use a unique twist on the classic dragon mantra by giving dragons the ability to morph into human form. What drew you to using that angle?
There are many myths about dragons being able to take on human form. I also needed a way for dragons to be able to survive in our modern world. No better way to do that than to hide in plain sight and become those celebrities everyone loves.

Did you study a lot of dragon/dragonslayer lore to prep for this story? If so, what were a few of your favorite discoveries and how did they influence your writing?
Not at all! I wanted to write something new and not be overly influenced by any particular myth or story.

What’s your favorite part of this story?
My favorite part is the interaction between Xan and Lois. The scenes where they're talking and Lois fires a million questions at him. He's brave, but even he's taken back by her ferocity. I love the way she shakes up his perfectly ordered world.

Okay, with a 'gorgeous' reporter named Lois in your story, I have to ask…are you a Superman fan?
Ha! That's so funny you ask that question. Lois makes a comment about her name in the first chapter. I'm not particularly a Superman fan, but I do love superheroes. Also, in the case of Lois, she's one of those characters that named herself. She wouldn't let me change it.

What’s your favorite dragon-related book other than your own?
Hm, this is a tough one. Katie MacAlister has some great dragon series in the paranormal romance genre. Yet I'm going to go with Jessica Day George's Dragon Slippers series. It's an incredible MG trilogy. I love the magic and the politics. Plus, I love that each dragon hordes different things like stained glass windows or shoes.

Thanks again, Christine! Best of luck on launching the rest of the series. And now, fellow readers, off to the bookstore links...



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Christine Rains is a writer, blogger, and geek mom. She has four degrees which help nothing with motherhood, but make her a great Jeopardy player. When she's not writing or reading, she having adventures with her son or watching cheesy movies on Syfy Channel. She's a member of S.C.I.F.I. The 13th Floor series is her first self-published series. She has four novellas and eighteen short stories published.

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First Names = Characters, You're in Trouble


If you're anything like me, you know quite well that the main purpose of middle names is so you can tell when you're REALLY in trouble. They are the default, "I'm warning you" setting for most parents.

I was reading a book the other day and realized that, in fiction, first names can have that same kind of stopping power. For slightly different reasons.

Let's look at some examples.

Dresden Files
Harry's love interest and partner in crime fighting is Karrin Murphy, affectionately known to him as "Murph" throughout most of the series. Only about twice a book, do we see a "Karrin" slipped in there, and it typically happens at points of high tension or character change. This shifts a little as the series goes on and they become closer, and because readers have been familiar with what I'll call the "First Name Rule" up until that point, the more frequent use of her name is a sign in itself of their growing relationship.

Fever Series
Karen Marie Moning does an excellent job of stoking the chemistry between her two main characters in part because of the names by which they know each other--Barrons and Ms. Lane. It only becomes "Jericho" and "Mac" in situations of life and death. The characters know it and react to it, and readers do too!

Clive Cussler's Dirk Pitt Books
This is another one where the two main characters, best friends, rarely think of each other by their first names (or, at least, rarely speak them out loud). If Al or Dirk do call each other directly by name, you know something's about to go down.

Castle
Okay, not a book...but still awesome! When they started calling each other "Rick" and "Kate," instead of "Castle" and "Beckett," it meant something and we all knew it. Even without any other hints.

How about you? Do you do this in your writing? Have you noticed it in your reading?

Oh, Those Crazy Titles

Ah, those tricky titles. Why does the thing with the fewest words in our book always seem to be what we fret over most?

I tend to not worry about titles until the end of my editing phase. I name drafts after the main characters and, by the time I wrap up edits, an actual title usual emerges. I also get a kick out of playing with chapter titles - some of my books have only numbers, others have phrases. I know some folks use quotes, too.

So, here are a couple "You Tell Me" questions. What do YOU think about books titles and chapter titles?

Novel Titles


Chapter Titles


*UPDATE* Looks like the Blogger twilight zone duplicated the poll answers. So, here are the actual choices for Novel Titles, if you care to see 'em. I left the old one up so people could see the tallies, too.
 

Novel Titles

Surrender

Writing is a struggle. We push so, so hard, give up so much sleep, invest so much time…and there’s still no guarantee we’ll make it. We fight against the distractions and the odds. We cry and scream and somehow drag ourselves back to the story again and again.

It’s enough to give anyone doubts in the quiet hours.

Is this really what we’re meant to do? Would it be so bad to give it up? But, we know we can’t, because this is a part of us.

I have a favorite song for times like this. It’s called Surrender, of all things, and it’s a beautiful reminder that dreams, like ours for writing, are a gift. It’s my way of reaffirming, of re-asking , of praying, “If this is truly what I’m meant to do, please, I could use a little help.”

It has always given me strength. I hope it does for you, too.

Surrender, by BarlowGirl
My hands hold safely to my dreams
Clutching tightly not one has fallen
So many years I've shaped each one
Reflecting my heart, showing who I am

Now you're asking me to show
What I'm holding oh so tightly
Can't open my hands, can't let go
Does it matter?
Should I show you?
Can't you let me go?
Surrender, surrender you whisper gently
You say I will be free
I know, but can't you see?
My dreams are me. My dreams are me.*
You say you have a plan for me
And that you want the best for my life
Told me the world had yet to see
What you can do with one
That's committed to Your calling

I know of course what I should do
That I can't hold these dreams forever
If I give them now to You
Will You take them away forever?
Or can I dream again?
*This is the line that always gets me.

Phoenixes

Scattergun Scribblings
 
Today is Nick Wilford's Overcoming Adversity blogfest. It's an amazing fest for an awesome cause!

As I thought about what to post, I realized I've encountered people with some incredibly powerful stories over the years, and I wanted to share a little about what that's meant for me. Enjoy!

In fiction, it’s so easy to get caught up in larger-than-life characters and fate-of-the-world stakes that we often overlook the everyday heroes. But they’re there. All around us—on the page and in life.

They make us believe it’s still possible to create a real difference for someone. To get back on our feet, continue the fight and change people’s lives, even in the smallest of ways. I’ve been blessed and privileged to witness so many examples of those who have overcome adversity. In a few cases, I’ve even talked at length with these heroes, to capture their stories as best I could, and though they may not know it, they’ve been some of my greatest teachers.

There are a precious handful of interviews so humbling, eloquent and perspective shattering that they reduced me to honest-to-God tears of awe. Those are the ones that haunt the back of your mind long after the articles are written and published. The mother whose pride and gratitude for her young Marine son, killed in action, flowed through the phone line with the poignancy of a flag-draped coffin.  The man who struggled to teach himself to breath and speak again after a devastating stroke; who believed, not in worrying over whether life’s glass was half full or half empty, but in simply offering thanks that we’re given the glass in the first place.

It is the very best part of my job. A reminder that a writer’s words can still give voice to those with stories worth telling. Stories that seem to make you a better, wiser person just for having read them or heard about them. They offer a window into someone else’s extraordinary life experience and reveal to each of us what we hope is the core essence of our humanity—the genuine, heartrending struggles from which quiet, steady and unassuming heroes arise like fledgling phoenixes.

Let us never lose sight of that.

Characters of Inspiration

We all know writers can pull inspiration from just about anywhere, and movies are a great source.

Below, in no particular order, are some of the characters that have sparked my imagination repeatedly over the years:

           


How about you? Do you have any favorites?