Evoking Summer

Last weekend was Memorial Day here in the states, which means:
  1. It was the perfect time to thank all the men and women in the military, and their families
  2. It was the unofficial start of summer!!
That got me thinking about the seasons and how to capture them when describing our settings on the page.
 
We all know summer is more than just words or phrases like green trees, bright sun and warm temperatures. It’s a mood, an emotion, an essence. Fun-filled memories and nostalgia for long, lazy days off of school.
 
My favorite examples of evoking summer are the Pure Michigan radio ads. Those of you in the Midwest might already be sick of them (they’ve run the last several summers), but for those who have never heard them before, you’re in for a treat.
 
I fully admit to getting sappy every time these ads come on the radio!
 
Listen to the tone, the rhythm of the words. The campaign uses wonderful lyrical imagery: a tea party  that served only lake water; climbing tall castles of light. Immediately, an image of a moment jumps into our minds, and we’re pulled into the scene. That’s what we should aim for in our written work, too.
 
Enjoy and happy early summer!



Coloring the Page: Yellow


Next up in our recurring color thesaurus series is YELLOW! For those who’ve missed the earlier installments, it’s based on one of my favorite writing tools — a descriptive kaleidoscope created by a gentleman who is blind but had his sight until he was 11.

Amber – brownish yellow
Apple Yellow – Normally a light to dark yellow or yellowish green
Banana Yellow – Moderate to light yellow
Bisque – Pale orange yellow to yellowish gray. Also, moderate yellowish pink.
Blond – Light yellow or light golden
Burnt Yellow – Dark brownish yellow
Butter – A moderate to rich yellow
Buttercup – Glossy yellow
Butterscotch – Golden or light brownish yellow
Canary Yellow – Bright vivid yellow
Corn Yellow – White to moderate yellow
Eggshell – A pale yellow to yellowish white
Egg Yolk Yellow – Strong yellow
Flaxen – Pale yellow
Gold or Golden – Yellowish brown
Goldenrod – Yellowish gold
Honey – Yellowish or brownish or golden
Jaundice – Yellowish gray…as in, unhealthy
Lemon – A brilliant, vivid yellow to greenish yellow
Mustard – A dark yellow to light olive brown
Sallow – Sickly yellowish in hue
Sunburst – Bright illuminating yellow
Sunflower – Brilliant yellow to strong or vivid gold
Topaz – Deep gold, leaning toward brown
Wheat – Golden yellow or white gold
Xanthous – Yellow, light brown or yellowish

Check out the posts for Red, Blue and Green too! And stop by the Bookshelf Muse - the originators of the emotion thesaurus and all sorts of other great resources.

Running Shoes

The thing about chasing dreams is that you have to chase them. 

In hot pursuit. Like a cop after a bad guy.

You’ve got to run with all your might to keep them in sight. Even then, they can take a sudden turn down an unexpected alley and, for a moment, you’ve lost them.

They knock you down again and again.

You stand there, sweating and panting, shaking your head because you know they just slipped through your fingers. Every muscle in you aches and you wish you’d been more in shape or better prepared…somehow.

None of us can predict the course our dreams will run.

In the end, it’s up to us to make the choice.
     Give it up and call for back-up.
          Or keep running.

Me, I’d invest in a good pair of running shoes.

Monday Miscellaneous

I owe Thank Yous to a trio of bloggers who were kind enough to give me a shout out last week.

Gina at Diary of a Writer in Progress nominated me for a Kreativ Blogger Award. She's got a great blog, so stop by and check it out.

As part of the award, you get to learn a few random things about me:

What is your favorite song? Anything by Bon Jovi.
What is your favorite dessert? Cheesecake with graham cracker crust.
What ticks you off? Laziness.
When you're upset, what do you do? Exercise...and sometimes debate. :)
Which is/was your favorite pet? My black lab, Maggie.
Which do you prefer to wear, black or white? Black.
What is your biggest fear? Not being able to leave something behind when I go. Also, tornadoes. :)
What is your attitude mostly? Optimistic! Life is so fun and has endless possibility.
What is perfection? Watching stars from the pier on a warm summer night after being out on the water all day with family.
What is your guilty pleasure? Project Runway. :)

Andrea at The Enchanted Writer also mentioned me as part of the Bookshelf Muse's Random Acts of Kindness. This one means a lot, especially since I've been able to follow Andrea from the early days of her blog. She offers lots of great advice and fun insights.


Finally, Nick at Scattergun Scribblings called me out for the Lucky 7 Meme. I actually posted a snippet a few weeks ago (You can see it here) so I won't double-up, but I wanted to give Nick a mention, too.

And, if you're looking for even more excitement in the blogosphere, check out the flashers...er, flash fiction aficionados...as part of Cherie Reichs' Flash Fiction Blogfest this week.

Ask the Reader #3


We haven’t done an “Ask the Reader” in a while. Next up is my friend Michele:

What genres do you typically read? Paranormal, mystery, thriller, romance.

Who/what are some of your favorite authors/books? Charlaine Harris, Douglas Preston & Lincoln Child, Jim Butcher, Sarah Addison Allen, Diana Gabaldon, Laurel K. Hamilton, Janet Evanovich, Jeanine Frost…I could go on, but I won’t.

What is most likely to draw you in to a book? If I like the writing style and it’s a good story, I will be drawn in.  I will usually give a book 50-100 pages, and if I am not interested I will not read it.

What are some of your big turn-offs in a book? Too many complex characters.

What do you wish authors would do more of? Come to WI for book signings!

How do you interact with your favorite authors (visit websites, write letters, etc.)? Visit websites, friends on Facebook.

How do you hear about new books that might interest you? From my favorite authors or from reading anthologies that my favorite authors are in.

Where do you typically get your books these days? Library or Barnes & Noble.

Have you ever had a “throw the book across the room” moment? If so, why? Mockingjay – Book #3 in the Hunger Games trilogy, I was so angry by the end of that book…it was a totally different writing style and just did not seem like the same author.

What do you look for in a good story? I like something that keeps my attention without making me think too much.

Check out earlier "Ask the Reader" posts here:
Ann’s
Katie’s

Question for You: Self-Publishing Plunge

I’ve been debating for a while now about e-pubbing some of my short stories. They’re good reads in themselves, I’d love to share ‘em with you and I think it could be a fun experiment…but I’m still on the fence for one main reason.

I thought I’d throw the question out to you and see what insights you can share.
Here’s the deal:
  • I write fantasy. That’s what all of my longer, more serious work is. However, all my short stories are contemporary “snippets of life” or, in at least one case, a thriller. Do I risk anything by publishing short work that’s not in my main genre?
Do any of you have experience in this? Any pitfalls to avoid?

Onscreen Authors We Love: Joan Wilder

I figured I’d start this series with the reigning queen of onscreen authors.

Joan Wilder, romance novelist.

My Dad likes to joke that I’m a little like Joan Wilder, and what’s not to love? She’s got an adventurous imagination and a determined spirit that she weaves into her stories. I mean, c’mon, the opening scenes from her writing? So great!

Plus, I can totally relate to the Post-it notes scattered around her house at the beginning of Romancing the Stone to remind her to buy important household items like Kleenex and toilet paper, which she has ignored for days because she’s been too busy writing. Ha!

I love her defiantly optimistic belief that she’ll find her “Jesse.” And the feeling of tearful delight as she types the last words of her novel. Yeah…we’ve all been there (or hope to be there), right?

In Jewel of the Nile, we see her get frustrated with her writing (again, who hasn’t been there!), but she buckles down and comes out on top. She’s also got some hilarious quips about her writing.

As she’s trying to break out of a jail cell with a crowbar:

The Jewel: What are you doing?
Joan: In my last novel, Angelina and the Savage Secret, Angelina used a nail file to chip away at the bars of her cell to remove them and escape to freedom.
The Jewel: How long did this take?
Joan: Two pages.

As she and leading man Jack Colton are hanging over an endless pit, in the clutches of the bad guy. Acid is dripping on Joan’s rope and rats are eating away at Jack’s rope:

Jack (to the bad guy): What kind of sick, twisted mind would even come up with something like this?

*Bad guy looks at Joan*

Joan: …The Savage Secret, Jack…it was my best seller.

*A few minutes later*

Jack: So how'd they get out?
Joan: What?
Jack: In The Savage Secret.
Joan: Oh. Um... Jesse had a knife hidden in his boot. You wouldn't happen to have a knife, would you?
Jack: I'm not even wearing underwear.

Also check out Joan's wisdom on pirates.

I’ve got quite a few of these “onscreen author” posts up my sleeve. Add your own faves in the comments trail.

Happy Friday & Giveaway Winner!

TGIF! It's a great day to announce the giveaway winner, and our friends over at Random.org tell me that person is...

*drum roll, please*

...TL Conway!!


Congrats, Tricia! You're lucky commenter #3. Email me your pages, and I'll send ya my critique. So excited to read them!

Thanks to everyone else who jumped in, too. I'm a little sad I didn't give away a book this time since it's so fun to get people hooked on new reads. So, I'm sure you guys can look forward to more giveaways in the future.

In the meantime, enjoy the weekend!

Book Launch 101 – Part Three

Part 1
Part 2

Yesterday, we looked at the specific marketing tactics my agency used to launch our client’s book. But that was non-fiction and had a very targeted readership…so how can we, as writers, apply those lessons to our own book marketing?
Here are some of my tips*:

Keep an ongoing list of folks who might be interested in learning about your book – everyone from friends and family, to writing mentors, fellow bloggers, etc. This becomes your first “I published a book!!” contact list. You can let them know through email, Facebook, however you usually communicate with each of them…the idea is that this is your core group of ambassadors. They will help you spread word of mouth.

Be cool. Don’t go overboard with this. You need a legitimate existing connection with these people for them to feel excited for you and want to share the news.

Investigate opportunities to present at local bookstores, libraries and TV/radio. Public radio is often thrilled to talk with local authors. 

Develop a handful of key messages you want people to remember about your book. Keep the phrases short and snappy. You’ll use these in your other promotional language and in interviews. The idea is to leave readers with a clear, consistent image of what makes your book great and why they should read it.

Post a chapter excerpt and offer advance order opportunities at a discounted price.

Consider a book trailer and/or short video interviews with you – could be about your characters, your favorite scenes, your inspiration, etc.

Create a list of media you want to target. I cheat. At work, we have access to a database for all reporters in the U.S. and some in Canada. Another hint – your college alumni magazine would probably love to do an article about your success!

Draft and distribute a news release. It’s pretty simple to write. The facts about your book, what it’s about and why readers should be interested, and where they can find it. Send it out via email about a week prior to launch.

Follow up with bloggers, reviewers and reporters who featured your previous pieces or with whom you have ties. (FYI – keep this local…the NYT, for example, likely won’t even bat an eye at stuff like this.) If you’re comfortable, reach out to pod-casters as well.

Make ARCs/Galleys available to key reviewers (For e-books, offer copies to book bloggers).

Create an Amazon Author Page and make sure it’s linked to your blog, website, etc. (FYI – you can access Amazon’s Author Central once you have a book available through them.)

Take some time to develop your jacket copy (The copy and layout that’ll be on your front and back covers).

Include teasers for your other work or forthcoming pieces at the end of the book you’re currently releasing. This helps pull readers from book to book in your collection.

Invest in a little swag. It doesn’t have to be expensive. A simple flyer or bookmark with your cover art can make a great addition to your presentations, conferences or as a leave-behind in community shops. NYT bestselling author Lesley Kagen is from my area, and she uses this technique very well! She had bookmarks for her latest book in the diner at my work building.

Utilize social media: Blogs, forums, Twitter and Facebook are relatively easy and free! If you haven’t already read David Gaughran’s blog, check it out. It’s got some fantastic suggestions for how to leverage social media during a book launch.

Make sure you’ve considered all distribution channels.
  • Amazon (Kindle), Barnes & Noble (Nook), Indie e-book sites like Smashwords
  • Independent book sellers – you can find a list of indies, by state, pretty easily, and then you can follow up
  • Libraries or academic institutions (This is harder to get into without a publisher/agent, especially on the fiction side. A good first step is talking with your local library or school libraries.)

Whew, that’s a lot to consider. Let’s all take a deep breath. You don’t need to do it all or do it all at once, but it’s wise give each of these steps careful thought before launching a self-pubbed book.

I hope this helped clarify a few things. Good luck guys!

*Same disclaimer: This is just one particular example of a book launch. I’m not an agent or a publicist, and all my advice is based only on my personal experience. I’m sure there are many, many different ways to go about this – these ideas are simply what worked in this particular situation.

Book Launch 101 – Part Two

Part 1
Part 3

Ah, marketing. The biggest fear of many writers. And my favorite part of my day job! I’m hoping this will help you feel a little more informed and confident the next time you have to tackle it for your own work.

Below, you’ll see what we did for my client’s book* and, tomorrow, I’ll cover some of my do-it-yourself tips.

Marketing Materials

Executive summary - An 8-page summary of the book's highlights in an easy-to-read design.

Key messaging document - WHY should readers pay attention to this book.

Lessons learned document – WHAT will readers take away from this book.

PowerPoint slides featuring the book – We added these slides to the end of presentations my client was already giving, so that audiences were aware of the book’s upcoming release.

Swag – A simple two-sided flyer used as a handout at the events and presentations my client was already booked for during the months leading up to the launch.

Cover letters – We did one for each specific audience we wanted to reach: media, industry leaders, legislators, and business experts. It was geared toward their specific reasons for being interested in the book.

Cover blurbs – In our case, we got blurbs from several prominent industry leaders. For fiction, blurbs are usually from other authors.

Media lists – We developed extensive lists of book reviewers and reporters at large daily newspapers, trade magazines and blogs.

Online interest form – We posted info about the book on my client’s website about two months before it released. Visitors could put their name down on an “advance list” if they were interested in receiving the book once it came out.

News release – We wrote and distributed an official announcement release about the book – this went out to the media a few weeks in advance. We also were in touch with media contacts and bloggers ahead of this, to make sure they were primed to talk about the book.

Tweets – We suggested several tweets and hashtags for our client to use on release day and in the weeks following to maintain a good buzz for the book.

Author interviews – Our client did a handful of short video segments – no more than 2 minutes each – talking about his book, why he’d decided to write it, and what he hoped readers got out of it.

Amazon author page – We developed an Amazon author page for our client before the release of his first book. For this launch, we made sure it was up-to-date. The page is automatically linked to his blog and website.

*Same disclaimer: This is just one particular example of a book launch. I’m not an agent or a publicist, and all my advice is based only on my personal experience. I’m sure there are many, many different ways to go about this – these ideas are simply what worked in this particular situation.

Book Launch 101 – Part One

Part 2
Part 3

Most of you know I’ve been managing a book launch at my day job. It’s for a healthcare business book—a sequel to the award-winning book we helped our client release a few years ago. The first book was published through an academic publisher, but we did this one on our own, so there was quite a bit more work involved. While the process isn’t apples-to-apples for fiction, I thought it’d be helpful to share some insights!*

Today, I want to share a snapshot of the overall timeline we worked with, so you can see the basic steps in the publishing process. Tomorrow, I’ll post some of my specific marketing tips.

There’s a lot of info to share, and I’m sure I’ll accidentally skip over some of it. If you guys have specific questions along the way, just shout ‘em out in the comments trail.

Basic Timeline
  • Copyediting: 4.5 months out
  • Cover art design: 4.5 months out
  • Review cover art design and overall book layout: 4 months out
  • Submit to high-profile review publications (NYT, Kirkus, etc.): Most of these won’t accept anything closer to the public release date. They each have their own set of application forms and rules on their websites. NYT, for example, won’t take anything that’s not on the shelves in big consumer bookstores.
  • Obtain ISBN and bar code: 4 months out
  • Develop marketing plan and team: 4 months out
  • Final copyedits and book design due: 1 month out
  • Final printing and e-conversion: Month prior to release

I can’t stress enough the importance of preparing early. Granted, we had a large approval team, whereas self-publishing authors usually only need approval from themselves and a handful of close friends or family. I’d still recommend getting organized several months ahead of time.

There’s also a ton of back-and-forth coordination during each step. I can definitely see why a) an agent might be helpful in handling these items so the author has time to write the next project and b) why it takes so freaking long to get things published.

Here’s a glimpse of what I did day-to-day:

9-10 a.m. – Conference call re: distribution channels, cover design edits (changing the color on one element of the image), and a list of people/legislators/reporters to receive advance copies of the book; printer timelines and galley options.

10:30 a.m. – Update latest production and marketing timeline.

11:45 a.m. – Emergency phone call re: how to fit our publishing logo on the book spine; select elements of the logo design that will work in a 1” width space.

1 p.m. – Finalize messaging, news release, cover letters for key audiences, and “Lessons Learned” excerpt.

2:30 p.m. – Call to review edits on the back cover blurbs

And this type of stuff was pretty consistent, every day for at least a month prior to the release. Keep in mind, this is just one book launch – I’m not an agent or editor, and this is in between work for our other "non-book-related" clients.

The process could definitely be streamlined through e-publishing, and I think more and more authors are realizing that. For this book, we’re doing both print and Kindle, but all our timelines are developed based on the printing schedule.


Also, don't forget to get your name in for the 100 Followers giveaway. The post is here.

*Disclaimer: This is just one particular example of a book launch. I’m not an agent or a publicist, and all my advice is based only on my personal experience. I’m sure there are many, many different ways to go about this – these ideas are simply what worked in this situation.

You Asked For It...

Here you go! Derby pics from this weekend.


A while back, I was also tagged in the Lucky 7 meme so here's a 7-line snippet from page 7 of Windfarer:

If there was ever a time for your crazy superstitions to be right, Danae, please let it be today, Crysta thought. The food wouldn’t last until she reached Council, the water barely would, and now, she’d managed to land herself in the Mountain’s shadow. Well done, Crysta.

She retrieved her daggers from the folds of her skirt. If she was going to search out food this close to the Shadowed Cliffs, she didn’t dare go unarmed. Chase always told her only dead men went into battle without a weapon and only fools went in with a single blade. Crysta carried six. She dried the knives and returned them to their places, hands faltering when she remembered the fate of the last Windfarer to walk these sands.


If you haven't signed up for the giveaway yet, check out the post here. I'll keep it open through this week.

Giveaways and Glorious Hats!

Is everyone recovered from the A-Z? Good.

I had a blast with this year's challenge and met some fantastic new bloggers. Thanks to all who stopped by.

And now, onto the Giveaway!

During the challenge, I passed the 100 follower milestone and, since this month will also mark the one-year anniversary of Write Me A World, I'm doubly excited to spread the fun and give a great prize to one lucky commenter.

I thought it would be neat to build off my A-Z theme, so you get to choose from:
  • A query critique
  • An edit of a 1,000 word section of your very awesome WIP
  • A copy of any one of the titles featured in my A-Z posts (Except the Oxford Dictionary, because let's face it, it's a dictionary, and I just wouldn't feel properly celebratory about giving that away)
Just leave a comment with which prize you'd prefer, and I'll use our friendly neighborhood random number generator to pick a winner.

Thanks to all of you for your comments and thoughts this past year. It's been a wonderful ride so far!

I'm off to the Kentucky Derby this weekend (This year's hat is on the right. I wore the one on the left a couple years ago). Next week, we'll be back to our regularly scheduled blogging, and I've got some great posts planned about managing a book launch.

Stay tuned!